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Monday, January 12, 2015

Class Notes on Mentor Text Picture Books

811 Notes
Themes/messages:
-       It’s important to speak up for others who are being persecuted or victimized
-       Often when your “group” is not being affected, it’s hard to care about other groups; however, it’s important to ourselves in others’ shoes and we should help other people because what affects them might affect you in the future

Style/craft:
-       Follows pattern of the poem; repeats structure of “first they came for… then they came for…”
-       Allegory: terrible things=Nazis; all animals are people being discriminated against
-       Little rabbit represents people who wanted to but were scared to speak out
-       Big rabbit represents propaganda
-       Terrible things had power because of the fear they created,  because they had no opposition, they were a large force
Genre/author’s purpose
**Call to action
*Envision possibility
**Bearing witness

811 Notes on Freedom Summer by Deborah Wiles
Messages:
-       Respect people of every race, even if it’s not a popular thing.
-       Skin color is not important; what’s more important is friendship and kindness; one’s personality and internal characteristics are important – in the end we are human
-       A larger problem or conflict such as segregation affects people in small ways, even children
-       You can challenge racism and other injustices in even small ways  
-       Small actions can impact a movement for equality
-       Similar to other texts such as Brown Girl Dreaming
-       The books shows that if you speak up against a problem, it can make a difference
-       Accept people’s differences
Genre and author’s purpose:
-       Historical and/or realistic fiction
-       Call to action and envision possibility  
Style and craft:
Writing:
-       Repetition of important phrases such as “he wasn’t allowed” to show conflict
-       Simple language; from Joe’s perspective, focuses on perspective of child (1st person)
-       Complex messages
Illustrations:
-       Focus on John Henry
-       Many large images – shows significance
-       Some smaller images
-       Show the conflict; symbolize the problem
-       Paintings; mostly realistic
-       Colors indicate mood; uses many different colors
-       The art explains the story; focuses on positive aspects of the story
The Librarian of Basra by Jeanette Winter
Message:
-       Books and knowledge are more precious than money or jewels because reading is sacred
-       Books and reading are very important to Islam
-       You can accomplish a lot if you are determined and work together with others in the community
-       Protect what is important
Genre and author’s purpose:
-       Historical nonfiction; biography
-       Envision possibility and somewhat call to action
Style and craft:
-illustrations: colors symbolize mood, blue skies show hope and overcoming bad; war – dark, red and orange fire; after colors get brighter to show hopeful ending; symbols such as the moon and star = Islam;  
- writing: very few words on a page; 3rd person point of view, from perspective of adult; no children characters; significant message for children; complex meaning in simple way

The Lorax by Dr. Seuss
Message:
-       Even though bad things happen in the past, you can make it better/change it.
-       You have to speak up and protect things or people or creatures in the world that have no voice.
-       Speak for the trees!
-       We shouldn’t take our resources for granted and should take care not to lose them.
-       Don’t be greedy and let money be the most important goal; in starting a business, you need to manage your resources and be responsible.
-       When you make mistakes, correct/fix them.

Style and craft:
Writing:
-       Made-up words: biggering
-       Imaginative creatures
-       End rhyme
-       Rhythm and flow
Illustrations:
-       Intentional colors to convey mood and show problem worsening
-       Sky shows what is happening in the environment
-       Last page: sky lightens to show hope
-       No faces on the Onceler and family; only shows their hands
-       Characters are different creatures; the Lorax has a face; his color doesn’t change; this shows he is important and is the activist  

Life Doesn’t Frighten Me by Maya Angelou
Message:
-       Conquer your fears; overcome them by using your mind
Paintings:
-       Sometimes scary
-       Like a child drew them
Writing:
-       Narrator is  a child
-       She is proud, not scared
-       Simple language
-       Specific details:
-       Structure: couplet + title; repetition  

812 Notes on Terrible Things
Messages/Themes
1.    When people work together, they are stronger
2.    Elders aren’t always right
3.    Follow your instinct in doing what is right even if others oppose you
4.    Stand up for people in your community
5.    Raise awareness about certain problems in order to prevent them from happening
6.    In a community, it is your responsibility to support and protect each other.
7.    If you are a bystander, the problem may get bigger and you might become a victim. You may regret it in the future.
8.    Act on a problem when you first see it.
Genre and author’s purpose:
-folktale/fiction/ historical fiction
- cautionary tale
-allegory
Author’s purpose: call to action and bearing witness
Writing style/illustration:
-       Terrible things=Nazis; they discriminated against people based on their physical appearances
-       Creatures=victims of the Holocaust –

Freedom Summer
812 notes
Author’s Note/Foreword:
-       Segregation deprived blacks of equal rights
-       Segregation was ended by Civil Rights Act of 1964
-       Even after this law was passed, people did not accept integration and some closed their businesses
-       Freedom Summer:  movement to get more blacks to vote
-       Community
-       Unity/equality
Messages/Themes
-       Little changes and small steps can make a big difference
-       During segregation and the beginning of integration, people had to overcome many obstacles to gain freedom
-       Friendship can help overcome obstacles; when friends and people unite, they can make a difference
-       Joe and John stuck together; it’s important to stand up for others who have less equality
-       Stand up for one another
Genre & Author’s Purpose(call to action, envision possibility, or bearing witness)
-       Historical fiction about the end of segregation in the South/1964
-       Realistic fiction
-       Author’s purpose: to show readers how hard integration was; envision possibility
Writing and illustration style and craft
-       Writing: language and words show how people from the South speak (dialect) and that the narrator is a child; descriptive: “spouted like whales” – simile
-       Illustrations: cold and darker colors in the beginning; in the end, brighter; somewhat abstract and mysterious; “together”ness is shown in most illustrations to emphasize message; colors blend in and blur; show they care about each other   
Ideas for writing picture books:
-       Self-confidence  - how to have it, hold on to it
-       9/11 allegory
-       Animal extinction
812 Notes on The Librarian of Basra by Jeanette Winter

Messages:
-       During times of war, we should not just think about ourselves; we need to all think about protecting and taking care of other important things, such as books.
-       Hold on to hope even though it may seem impossible.
-       Alia Muhammed Baker shows us that people should not give up on doing the right thing; stay optimistic despite war.
-       Books are important because they hold parts of history, provide information, hold hope, important to culture and community.
-        

Genre/author’s purpose:
-       Nonfiction: historical, biography
-       Envision possibility – show hope

Style and craft:
-       Cartoony, bright colors
-       Deals with the tragedies of war in a kid-friendly way
-       Very few words on each page
-        
-       3rd person narrator
810 Notes
810 Notes on Terrible Things
1. Title and author  
2. Social issues and messages
- Don’t be selfish; help others when you can
- Treat people the way you want to be treated (the golden rule)
- If you don’t help others in need in the present, the problem will only get worse.
-  Always stick together as a community because you will have more power
- Don’t think of your race or group to be inferior or better than others, especially out of fear.
- It’s important to raise awareness about injustices or problems and make others aware of the problem.
- Young children can make a change, have a voice, and can be wise and more open-minded.  Sometimes children know more than or are wiser than grown ups.

3. Genre and author's purpose  
- allegory
- historical fiction
- Bearing witness: shows the suffering caused by the Terrible Things
-call to action: encourages young children to speak up
- envision possibility

4. Style and craft 
Writing
- story begins with a peaceful community; everyone is together; this contrasts with the end because only the little rabbit survives
- in the beginning, the characters are not selfish, caring; they change for the worse throughout the story
- very repetitive: dialogue of characters who are not taken away; “Until the Terrible Things came back”
- dialogue reveals conflicts and characters’ emotions
Illustrations
-       Black and white; the title and illustrations shows sadness and tragedy
-       The enemy is not human;  they are more like shadows, large, dark figures
-       When the terrible things come, the illustrations get darker, more shaded
-       Characters are very detailed, not so much the background

Freedom Summer
Author’s Note/Foreword:
-       Conflict: it was dangerous for a black and white child to be friends;
-       Shows that segregation was difficult for both races
-       Children were affected by this as well
-       Children were more open-minded than adults
-       People grow up with racism; must be confusing and difficult for children
-       Similar to Terrible Things – about difficult and painful times in history
-       How did this racism start to spread?
-       Racism might affect children by making them unhappy with who they are/identity and self-esteem
-       Why and how did segregation become such a norm and part of reality?
-       A law was passed: Civil Rights Act of 1964 – gave all people regardless of race, religion, color, national origin the same civil rights; civil: 1. Calm and orderly; 2. Having to do with people/citizens
-       Freedom Summer: movement to get more blacks throughout the nation to vote

Themes/messages
-       You can be friends with people regardless of their race or color; friends should stick together
-       Follow your instinct regarding what is right, and do what is right even if it isn’t accepted by the majority
-       Sometimes you need to change your attitude, take risks to do what is right
-       All people are affected when there is an injustice or lack of freedom or limited freedom
-       Don’t just wait for change; be the change
-       Don’t be afraid to fight for what you believe in
-       The characters hesitated at first because they were scared, bu t in the end they go against the unfair society
-       Work together
Genre and author’s purpose (call to action, envision possibility, or bearing witness)
-       Fiction based on nonfiction
-       Historical and realistic fiction
-       Envision possibility/call to action: shows to make society better by working together
Craft and style (writing and illustrations)
-       Writing:
o   Hopeful ending
o   Repetition of “me, too”; “he’s not allowed”
o   The end goes back to a problem in the story; shows resolution
o   Told from point of view of Joe who is a young white boy witnessing the problems of segregation; 1st person point of view is more personal
o   The language shows language of a young child
o   Details: metaphor: comparison of 2 different things; simile – uses like or as; dialogue

-       Illustrations:
o   Colors and images matched what was happening in the story and the mood
o   Natural details though not precise, a bit blurry
o   Many symbols; unspoken words
o   Colors blend in
o   Show emotions through color and characters’ actions



810 Notes on The Librarian of Basra by Jeanette Winter

Messages:
-       Books are symbols of hope even in war; books are important because they represent the past, their culture, religion; books symbolize peace
-       During hard times as in war, people need to help each other; work together as a community to protect what is important even if it’s dangerous
-       Alia was very determined and didn’t give up to save 30,000 books

Genre and author’s purpose:
-nonfiction; biography
- envision possibility

Style and craft:
Writing:
-       Simple words and sentences; straightforward
-       Repetition of Alia and books throughout

Illustrations
-       Cartoon-like, colorful and bright
-       Shows Alia’s feelings in her facial expressions
-       The focus was brightest or largest figure

Life Doesn’t Frighten Me by Maya Angelou; paintings by Jean Michel Basquiat

Messages:
-       You will only be afraid of things if you think they exist; fear only exists if you allow it to; it is an illusion
-       Life can be scary and challenging, and you shouldn’t let that stop you or frighten you
-        
Writing:
-       Narrator is a child; she writes about boys pulling hair;
-       she is not scared, self-confident
-       Tone: calm, fun or enthusiastic, playful
-       Repetitive
-       Rhyme
-        
Paintings:
-       Child-like, simple
-       Somewhat abstract
-       Dark undertones
-       Whimsical   





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