814:
Kate: thought-provoking comparison between The Hunger Games and the real world
Casey: nice and smooth structure and fluency; thoughtful reflection on the Percy Jackson series
Gabe: honest, mature response on Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban; meaningful personal connections
810:
Amani: focused, meaningful essay about the father-son relationship in Hurricane Song
Jason: very detailed essay - go Jason! Good focus and details in your response to Handbook for Boys
807:
Tulah: very sophisticated essay on "My Papa's Waltz"
Preston: you worked really hard on this essay on "Mother to Son"; good thesis and structure
Timothy: I like the earnest passion you use to write about Sold; your writing really has come a long way since the beginning of the year!
Sammie Jo: very philosophical essay on "Admonition"; this response opens our minds to new perspectives on writing about poetry
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