One of the hardest parts of writing poetry is revision; in this part of the process, try to get your poem to be
as precise and concise as possible. Here are three important aspects of your poetry to focus on:
1. Detail variety – incorporate a variety of specific, creative details: imagery, literary devices such as metaphor, onomatopoeia, alliteration, etc., emotions, facts/information/research
2. Complexity/Meaning – include layers of meaning, unexpected or surprise twists, questions, and thought-provoking ideas and opinions
3. Intentionality and purpose – word choice, organization including how the poem begins and ends, structure, punctuation and conventions, use of rhyme and other literary devices, line breaks, etc. should have a meaningful purpose and should be intentional; the tone and mood should be clear and consistent. Finally, line breaks should not be random, and if you are going to break a grammar rule, do it for a good reason.
Here are some students' poems; they are all really strong drafts. What do you think are the strengths of the
poems? How can the detail variety, complexity, and intentionality be improved?
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